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"You Make Me Laugh" (by ThatNerdyChick)

 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (31 / F-MF / Virginia)
16-Sep-12 3:16 pm
Your bitterness for all to see
Etched into facial apathy
You're out for blood, and mine the most,
You want to hold me up for roast
But peace of mind is in my court,
I know no claim you may assert
Your lying mouth is open-wide
But truth will overtake the tide.
My character will see me through
Whatever people say and do,
And for the record, here's what's true-
I have no time to waste on you.

 

 



Last edited by ThatNerdyChick; 16-Sep-12 3:24 pm.
 
 
 flowergrl23 
16-Sep-12 3:18 pm
Very cool girl

 

 

 
 
 Richard16 (1)    (31 / M-F / Ghana)
16-Sep-12 3:21 pm
keep it up girl,this is good

 

 

 
 
 jameshayes 
16-Sep-12 3:21 pm
nice

 

 

 
 
 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (31 / F-MF / Virginia)
16-Sep-12 3:22 pm
Thanks :)

 

 

 
 
 Countryguy22 
16-Sep-12 3:23 pm
That was beautiful. Keep up the poetry.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
16-Sep-12 3:25 pm
@ThatNerdyChick: this is sooo good, well done! :)

 

 

 
 
 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (31 / F-MF / Virginia)
16-Sep-12 3:26 pm
@james85: aww thanks!! :D

 

 

 
 
 jokerkitty669 
16-Sep-12 3:30 pm
Sweetness i like it

 

 

 
 
 keshiad (1)  (35 / F-M / California)
16-Sep-12 3:42 pm
thats really good.....keep it up

 

 

 
 
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