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Take me back (by unwound)

 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
2-Sep-12 2:08 pm
Take me back to days of wondering youth,where you imagined discovering what the world held for you. Where you dreamed of becoming someone something greater than you. When on the front porch you stole your first kiss from the freckled face girl down the road. When you could roam and not worry,of some unseen monsters lurking near. Going to town was a treat,new things to see and people you meet. There sets old men in front of the general store,spinning yarns and lore,while mom and dad browse and shop,ole uncle skeeter sips on a soda pop.Take me back to that time long ago,when the days were brighter and the lifes pace so slow.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
2-Sep-12 2:18 pm
can I go with you Darlin?

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
2-Sep-12 2:47 pm
That was really awesome. Reading it made me think back to my child hood.

 

 

 
 
 eprillevine5 
2-Sep-12 2:49 pm
aww.yur thread made me realise ''yes,i still have time to enjoy my teenage'':)

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
2-Sep-12 3:03 pm
That was really awesome. Reading it made me think back to my child hood.
Agree sissy !

OP made a vivid description too :) sighs .. Time fly so fast !

 

 

 
 
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