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Who do you think you are? (by IrishLove1988)

 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
28-Aug-12 11:27 pm
Who do you think you are?
What is it that makes you so sure?
Where does the hatred come from?
When will you see that you are everything that is wrong with our world?
Why do you feel the need to make others feel pain?

Who do you think you are?
What part of your soul is broken?
Where did society fail you?
When will you see that we are all created equally?
Why must you lash out at your fellow man?

Who do I think you are?
I think you are a part of the problem.
It is sad to see such a cruel and heartless being, inside human flesh.

What do I think has made you this way?
Life. Somewhere along the way, you got things twisted.
Someone must have seriously hurt you to make you such a vile soul.

Where can you go from here?
Up. You are already so low that you have no other choice.

When will things change?
When you learn the error of your ways, and find the truth behind the lies.

Why?
Because it's the right thing to do.

 

 

 
 
 MrAzizo (6)   (32 / M-F / Provincie Limburg)
28-Aug-12 11:29 pm
Wow, that was amazing. I'm sure this might be a real eye-opener for a few people down here, thanks for sharing it with us :)

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
28-Aug-12 11:31 pm
@MrAzizo: Thank you :) It's a sad state that the world is in these days.

 

 

 
 
 MrAzizo (6)   (32 / M-F / Provincie Limburg)
28-Aug-12 11:37 pm
@IrishLove1988:

Yeah I've unfortunately found out on that the hard way,

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
28-Aug-12 11:38 pm
@MrAzizo: You and me both, darlin!

 

 

 
 
 MrAzizo (6)   (32 / M-F / Provincie Limburg)
28-Aug-12 11:45 pm
@IrishLove1988:

Awh, good luck down there! Hope you'll be fine soon, dear :)

 

 

 
 
 D3VOTEDTC 
28-Aug-12 11:49 pm
That was really good

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
28-Aug-12 11:53 pm
@MrAzizo: I am good lol I just hate people that act that wy. @D3VOTEDTC: Thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 MrAzizo (6)   (32 / M-F / Provincie Limburg)
28-Aug-12 11:59 pm
@IrishLove1988:

Ahh well, wasn't quite sure how to bring it lol. Just hope it wasn't anything serious, and whatever it was your back on your feet now. You should totally consider doing more like these, your talented

 

 

 
 
 james85 
29-Aug-12 12:01 am
@IrishLove1988: wow great poem my friend just read this before i go to sleep :) anyways hope ur well :)

 

 

 
 
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