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[Amateur Poetry] (by LyricalLoser)

 LyricalLoser (0)  (30 / F-MF / Illinois)
26-Aug-12 10:52 pm
And in the starlit night,
I see the sun.

What paradox is this?
What glorious Goddess of the night
So embraces the day?

'Tis you,
O beauty of the darkness.
The sun is jealous
Of how tightly the night clings to you.

She cradles you in her embrace,
Lovingly protecting you from day,
Hiding you away from all sight.

But mine eyes long to gaze upon thee,
O beauty of the darkness,
O sweet Goddess of Night.

O bride of Death.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
26-Aug-12 10:58 pm
@LyricalLoser: hi :) this is really, really good! thanks for sharing :)

 

 

 
 
 LyricalLoser (0)  (30 / F-MF / Illinois)
27-Aug-12 12:38 am
@james85: Thank you for commenting.(:

 

 

 
 
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