All Forums >> Quick Fun (NEW!) >> Bored...

Im a poet and didnt even know it (jk!) (by D3VOTEDTC)

 D3VOTEDTC 
25-Aug-12 12:04 pm
Heres a poem I wrote awhile back:

HERSHEYS- BY D3VOTEDTC

He told her to come to the house one night
as she got ready her stomach grew tight
she arrived at his house at a little past four
he told her just to walk in the door
there were hershey kisses lined on the stairs
at the top a heartshaped key was there
next to it was a note in red
she picked it up this is what it said
"now that you found the key to my heart
come to the room where forever may start"
she went to the living room and there he stood
he sang "i swear" it was really good
he popped the question she started to cry
they were tears of joy she cannot lie
shell never forget this day of her life
now she is a happy wife

what poems have you written?

 

 

 
 
 anncleofaye1 
25-Aug-12 12:24 pm
awesome!! :)

 

 

 
 
 anncleofaye1 
25-Aug-12 12:27 pm
@devoted: hmm never done anything :) am not good at making poems :) hmm my only role is to sing and play them with guitar. lol. XD

 

 

 
 
 D3VOTEDTC 
25-Aug-12 12:39 pm
@ann: thanks hun (: i play guitar and sing as well.

 

 

 
 
 Estarley77 
25-Aug-12 2:48 pm
That was really good :)

 

 

 
 
 lonelylady88 
26-Aug-12 10:05 pm
i absolutely love that! It is so original and romantic! I use to write alot until i was told it was a waste of time. Thanks for sharing that!

 

 

 
 
 D3VOTEDTC 
26-Aug-12 10:20 pm
@lonely: thank you. Ill be posting another in just a min called "Bens Story" keep an eye out for it (:

 

 

 
 
 lonelylady88 
26-Aug-12 11:13 pm
oh i will!

 

 

 
 
Quick reply:

[Smilies]

RULES:
  • Be respectful at all times.
  • Be mature and act like an adult.
  • Respect different points of view.
  • Discuss ideas, not specific users.
  • Don't get personal.
  • No profanity.
  • No drama.
  • No thread hijacking.
  • No trolling.
  • No spamming.
  • No soliciting.
  • No duplicate posting.
  • No posting in the wrong section.
  • No posting of contact information.
  • Be welcoming to new users.
Repeated violations of the above will result in increasing temporary bans from the forum and an eventual permanent ban from the site. Basically, just be friendly and neighborly and all will be well.
Top
Home
Give us feedback!

Login:

* Username:

* Password:

 Remember me


Forgot?