Thread: As smoke dance's in an empty room

As smoke dance's in an empty room (by poetdawn)

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(39 / F-M / Indiana)
11-Aug-12 8:32 pm

There is a certain haunting silence, that only a seething heart can understand. a closing in of the walls. trembling hands, that ache for the heat of warm skin. lips that twist under the pressure of yearning for the passion in a kiss. as smoke dance's in an empty pale lit room. i sway to the rhythm of depressing love songs... quietly awaiting to sway to the rhythm of a heart beating against my own in a heated confession of the first. "i love you"s

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Aldo420
11-Aug-12 8:38 pm

Very good

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himfan26
11-Aug-12 8:39 pm

Love poetry

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alynn
11-Aug-12 8:43 pm

I would soooo love to get my hands on this to edit lol. It's really good. Thanks for sharing.

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poetdawn (2)

(39 / F-M / Indiana)
11-Aug-12 8:44 pm

;-)

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purecowboy1988
11-Aug-12 8:44 pm

@poetdawn: Nice poem

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poetdawn (2)

(39 / F-M / Indiana)
11-Aug-12 8:49 pm

@alynn: It was posted from my cell. :-) otherwise it would be in the correct form. thank you though.

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james85
11-Aug-12 8:50 pm

@poetdawn: hi, this is really good! :)

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Wessshantelle (10)

(34 / F-M / Texas)
11-Aug-12 9:09 pm

This was very inspireing. espesscially for a creative/potery writer like myself. we should share sometime

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