All Forums >> General >> Stories, Poems & Creative Writing

Little Girl (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
9-Aug-12 7:33 am
This is one of the oldest poems I wrote (I started it at 13 and finished it when I was about 15). I only have one that's older, and I wrote that at 8yrs old lol.
--------
A tear spilled down a little girl's cheek;
She didn't understand:
Why did no one like her?
Why did they laugh?

A little girl of five
Alone in kindergarten;
No friend to help her,
No one to care.
They just laughed at her
And taunted her.

Nearly fifteen now,
That little girl grew up;
Hearing words she can't repeat,
Getting laughed at and teased.
No one knowing-
Deep down inside:
She had died.
Because she laughed and smiled with ease,
Like the great actress she wanted to be.

 

 

 
 
 T3x4sb0y 
9-Aug-12 7:36 am
This actually made me shed waterfalls deep down.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
9-Aug-12 7:38 am
@T3x4sb0y: lol. thanks.... I think.

 

 

 
 
 T3x4sb0y 
9-Aug-12 7:50 am
@mrb89: in other words, I liked it a lot.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
9-Aug-12 7:51 am
@mrb89: just read this before i start my day, really good again my friend :)

 

 

 
 
 agapito (0)   (38 / M-F / Illinois)
9-Aug-12 8:14 am
Very very nice and sad.....

 

 

 
 
Quick reply:

[Smilies]

RULES:
  • Be respectful at all times.
  • Be mature and act like an adult.
  • Respect different points of view.
  • Discuss ideas, not specific users.
  • Don't get personal.
  • No profanity.
  • No drama.
  • No thread hijacking.
  • No trolling.
  • No spamming.
  • No soliciting.
  • No duplicate posting.
  • No posting in the wrong section.
  • No posting of contact information.
  • Be welcoming to new users.
Repeated violations of the above will result in increasing temporary bans from the forum and an eventual permanent ban from the site. Basically, just be friendly and neighborly and all will be well.
Similar threads:
Top
Home
Give us feedback!

Login:

* Username:

* Password:

 Remember me


Forgot?