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Perfect World (by EssexMatt1984)
(39 / M-F / England)If a single word could dry your eyes,
And somehow erase a thousand lies,
If one good deed could stop all crime,
One broken clock could freeze all time,
If when we were lost, we were handed a sign,
If now we could see, when we were once blind,
Then surely we'd be in a perfect world,
Where I were yours, and you were mine
And somehow erase a thousand lies,
If one good deed could stop all crime,
One broken clock could freeze all time,
If when we were lost, we were handed a sign,
If now we could see, when we were once blind,
Then surely we'd be in a perfect world,
Where I were yours, and you were mine
I am speechless. Wow. That is so amazingly beautiful it almost made me :'(. If only life could truly be that way......there would be no malice, chaos, pain, hate, sadness, or suffering. How i'd love to live in a world like that...
Thank you ladies! I'm flattered! I just read a load of the poems on here, and they inspired me to write again! :)
I was just thinking the same thing bout your poems matt....my fingers started itching...i am truly impressed!
Wow, this is just great! Yes, welcome to the forums, I hope you stick around and keep sharing with us. :)
Awww you girls are so nice :) I will definitely keep sharing, and I'm really glad you all like them :) thank you all
Yes. As a person who loves writing, I musy say. They are absolutely lovely...
That's really kind :) I normally write lyrics, but I kinda change the way I write if it's a poem
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