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A Beautiful Soul (by JLaDawn)

 JLaDawn 
2-Aug-12 3:20 am
If I cld kiss him he'd finally know,
And Cupid wld blush if he saw our passions show,
The earth wld move and the heavens wld weep,
The Fates wld shake at a desire so deep,
If my hands cld make contact with his perfect form,
Oceans wld dry and the arctic winds wld be warm,
It's more than lust that fuels my fires,
It's his beautiful soul that ignites my desires!

 

 

 
 
 starcandyzz 
2-Aug-12 3:21 am
Wow!

 

 

 
 
 hemmo 
2-Aug-12 3:31 am
Really amazing,

 

 

 
 
 Sassy2196 
2-Aug-12 4:59 am
I love it :) :D

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
2-Aug-12 5:46 am
Thanx Y'all!

 

 

 
 
 james85 
2-Aug-12 7:03 am
This is so good Jladawn thanks for sharing!

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
2-Aug-12 5:28 pm
This is so good Jladawn thanks for sharing!
thanks and your welcome

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
3-Aug-12 5:29 pm
Here it is

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
4-Aug-12 2:12 pm
Two thumbs up !

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
5-Aug-12 12:58 am
Two thumbs up !
well howdy! and Thanx Darlin!

 

 

 
 
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