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After A While (by handsomekid24)

 handsomekid24 (4)   (34 / M-F / South Carolina)
25-Jul-12 1:10 am
After a while, You learn the difference between holding a hand and falling in love. You learn that kisses dont always mean something. Promises can be broken just as quickly as they are mad. And sometimes goodbyes really are forever

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 1:12 am
Dude, that really puts a person in a sad mood. Like it though

 

 

 
 
 Usny (-3)    (42 / M-F / New York)
25-Jul-12 1:19 am
That was deep dude.. Kinda gay but deep.. Well said

 

 

 
 
 BeautifullyBrokenn91 (12)    (33 / F-M / Tennessee)
25-Jul-12 1:22 am
Omg. I LOVE this. Its Sooooo true.

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 1:25 am
Usny
Dont be rude. Hes putting himself out there with the writing. The gay bit was unnecessary

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
25-Jul-12 2:24 am
After a while, You learn the difference between holding a hand and falling in love. You learn that kisses dont always mean something. Promises can be broken just as quickly as they are mad. And sometimes goodbyes really are forever

Awwww .... Very true but sometimes we can change that views too :)

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes1211 
25-Jul-12 2:28 am
Very good

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
25-Jul-12 2:44 am
Usny, you could have just stopped at "That was deep dude.." cause you're sounding a tad bit rude. And unless by 'gay' you mean 'happy' you shouldn't be throwing that word out there like that, because it's offensive....just sayin..

 

 

 
 
 Youngasian22 
25-Jul-12 6:57 pm
That was deep dude.. Kinda gay but deep.. Well said
........... Lmao thats hilarious

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
26-Jul-12 1:29 am
Awesome! Well said! true and honest ,write what you feel,in spite of the negativty! Ps. Chin up it does get better

 

 

 
 
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