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This Isn't Love (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
14-Jun-12 4:51 am
Darling I need to run away,
Cause you're nothin more than a bad memory.
You leave me cryin and lonely,
And you act like you don't even care.

Do you ever see what you do to me?
You don't say a word to me for days on end,
And when you do all you say is words to bring me down.

This isn't love,
It's poison in my veins.
And I can barely keep up with you.
One day you're up,
The next you're down.

How much more heartache can I take from you?
Love isn't a game.
And I'm tired of my heart,
Bein the only thing played.

This isn't what love should look like,
Like I'm the only one tryin,
And you're the only one not in pain.
This isn't love, darling
And that's why I am done.
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just some of my random writings :)

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
14-Jun-12 4:56 am
I liked it. Very good. I hope you write more. I love the this section of the site when yall write.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
14-Jun-12 4:57 am
Lol. I write a lot, I have a ton already on my website... just randomly post them here to share them with you guys :)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
14-Jun-12 6:44 am
Very good work!, i'd like to read more, thanks for sharing

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
14-Jun-12 7:00 am
Awe thanks :)
I'd be more then happy to give you the link to my stuff, but I don't want to post it here on the forums... so if you would like to, message me and I'll give it to you :)

 

 

 
 
 Richard16 (1)    (30 / M-F / Ghana)
3-Aug-12 8:29 am
Great stuff, lets have more 4rm u

 

 

 
 
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