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Stardust & Moonbeams (If you are offended by mature content, DO NOT read!!!) (by IrishLove1988)

 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
7-Jun-12 10:17 pm
Second try lol. Let's see how this works out...


Stardust and Moonbeams, the night sky is made of.
Stardust and Moonbeams, underneath they made love.
Souls mingling, fingers intertwined.
He was so gentle, she was so kind.
He cherished every part of her. Heart, body and mind.

She loved his intelligence, his spirit, his laugh.
She blew him away, like a warm summer draft.
Under her spell, forever more.
Neither knew what was in store.
When he kissed her, her mind grew blank.
It seemed like forever, from his lips she drank.
Then and there, he knew it was right.
With her he would spend the rest of his life.

All through dinner, she knew what was to come.
She could feel it inside her, beating like a drum.
She asked him back to her place, to come up for a drink.
She knew what he'd expect, she knew what he would think.
He never thought she'd ask him, he'd thought she was afraid.
Clearly he was wrong, she'd prefer it if he'd stay.
She led him upstairs, into temptation.
All the way up, she fought contemplation.

Onto the balcony, he wrapped her in his embrace.
He wanted her, she knew, she could see it on his face.
She kissed him again, this time with intention.
Immediately, he came to attention.
She felt him pull her closer, and leaned into him.
He needed to see her eyes, he guided her chin.
What he saw there was love, pure as gold.
He wanted her forever, to be his to hold.

He kissed her eyes, her lips, her neck.
From here she knew, there was no turning back.
She went to the cupboard, and pulled out a sheet.
He took it from her, spreading it gently at her feet.
He pulled her down to him, she did not resist.
He took her arm, lightly kissing her wrist.
Slowly, he untied her dress, exposing her bare breasts.
He was more then excited, she could see his heaving chest.

Suddenly, there were no more clothes, no more masks to hide behind.
He knew how she'd be feeling, he searched her face, to find...
Tears were glittering in her eyes, from the rawness of her emotions.
She was adrift on a turbulent ocean.
She had never wanted anything more in her life.
Then wanting now, to become his wife.

He lay down atop her, gentle as could be.
Love in his eyes was all she could see.
She accepted him, without hesitation.
He melted away her pain and reservations.
Together they soared to ecstacy unkown.
From that moment on, they knew they'd never feel alone.
Floating on a warm sea of bliss,
upon her lips he placed a gentle kiss.

They settled back to earth, feeling the hot flush on their skin.
All through the night, they made love, again and again.
The sun rose in the sky, waking them with it's light.
Her face, in the morning, was a comforting sight.
She felt different, laying with him in the sun,
Amongst the rumpled sheets, testament to what they'd done.
He lowered his lips to hers, kissing her passionately.
"I'll be yours forever," She whispered. "Indeffinately." <3

 

 



Last edited by IrishLove1988; 7-Jun-12 10:25 pm.
 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
7-Jun-12 10:27 pm
Where's the LIKE button here?!!! :D

BRAVO! So detailed ...

 

 

 
 
 james85 
7-Jun-12 10:28 pm
@IrishLove1988: very nice poem, glad u got ur problem of posting it sorted

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
7-Jun-12 10:33 pm
@Rainbow: Thank you very much :)

@James: Thanks, I just wrote it in my wordpad and then copy and pasted it. I guess that solved the problem lol.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
7-Jun-12 10:41 pm
@IrishLove1988:your welcome, yeah looks that way, if u have any more i'd like to read them too cause i like a bit of poetry

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
7-Jun-12 10:48 pm
Omg irish that was awesome. I loved it its very very good. Please write more like this this is a work of art.

 

 

 
 
 Ram318 
7-Jun-12 11:33 pm
I hope we see more, u have talent girl:)

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
8-Jun-12 12:47 am
@James: I have a lot more. I've been writing since I was just a girl :)
@Brat: Thank you very much :) That means a lot to me.
@Ram: Thank you darlin :) I like to think so, but I may be just a wee bit bias ;)

 

 

 
 
 jenbug25 
8-Jun-12 12:58 am
You put into words what every woman wants to feel. It was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. I'm gonna go blow my nose now lol.

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
8-Jun-12 1:01 am
@Jen: Thanks :) That was exactly my intention with this one. I'm glad my point came across clearly.

 

 

 
 
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