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Born to die by choking victim (by punkrockfreedom)

 punkrockfreedom (1)    (30 / M-F / California)
14-May-13 6:48 pm
you'll die tomorrow by today your empty dreams just fade away evaporate, dissolve the hate, while you survive and wait in till a lifes fate your stupid lives just fiddle on you slave for others and then your gone we have no rights we have no future no reasons why we were born to die your dumb self cant appreciate the freedom in my thought the weak sense of antonomy when im drinkin in my squat gone to bed god is dead lies and truth are in my head your history, society

 

 

 
 
 AprilLove666 
14-May-13 6:53 pm
your dumb self cant appreciate the freedom in my thought the weak sense of antonomy when im drinkin in my squat gone to bed god is dead lies and truth are in my head your history, society
Sounded great until this part. "Your dumb self" is improper. & was "Antonomy" a typo?

Not trying to be rude. Trying to be helpful. I write & always want good & bad critisim

 

 

 
 
 punkrockfreedom (1)    (30 / M-F / California)
14-May-13 6:57 pm
yeah its okay but punk music does not have to be perfect thats why i like it

 

 

 
 
 punkrockfreedom (1)    (30 / M-F / California)
14-May-13 6:58 pm
i left some lyrics out

 

 

 
 
 AprilLove666 
14-May-13 6:59 pm
Oh I see. Its always different when you hear the music too

 

 

 
 
 punkrockfreedom (1)    (30 / M-F / California)
14-May-13 7:06 pm
yeah thats true did you check it out?

 

 

 
 
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