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To Mr.RaiderHater :) <3 (by CookieRaider)

 CookieRaider 
10-Apr-13 2:22 am
I wrote this poem especially for you

To prove that my love for you is true

Never shall I kiss someone else's lips

Never will we make any boring trips

Wes, you are unbelievably handsome

When I am near you my heart goes like a raging bull

Words cannot express

What I felt when you said 'yes'

Wes, you mean so much to me

I never knew this could be

You are my sweetheart day by day

I hope you will never go away

This Heart Of Love is for you, I hope you will like it

I am dying to see your reaction, that I will admit

This poem has come to an end

There are many more I would like to send

 

 

 
 
 ThisIsALongUsername 
10-Apr-13 2:25 am
At the end of the poem you should have added "oh and by the way, I text other men". Would have given it some flavor. :p

 

 

 
 
 CookieRaider 
10-Apr-13 2:27 am
@ThisIsALongUsername: whatever dude

 

 

 
 
 ThisIsALongUsername 
10-Apr-13 2:28 am
@ThisIsALongUsername: whatever dude
awesome... you have no humor.

 

 

 
 
 Raiderhater 
10-Apr-13 2:30 am
Fuc.k off dude quit tryna start shi.t

 

 

 
 
 CookieRaider 
10-Apr-13 2:30 am
@ThisIsALongUsername: I do but that would be stupid.. Its a love poem.. Not a I wanna lose my man poem -.-"

 

 

 
 
 ThisIsALongUsername 
10-Apr-13 2:31 am
Fuc.k off dude quit tryna start shi.t
lol.... here we go.

 

 

 
 
 AprilLove 
10-Apr-13 2:31 am
@Raiderhater: hes joking. Thats what he does.

 

 

 
 
 AdityaVashistha (2)    (29 / M-MF / India)
10-Apr-13 2:31 am
@Raiderhater: He was just kidding bro , no hard feelings and yes its a great poem written , you are lucky bro and i think u know it .

 

 

 
 
 ThisIsALongUsername 
10-Apr-13 2:32 am
@ThisIsALongUsername: I do but that would be stupid.. Its a love poem.. Not a I wanna lose my man poem -.-"
I know that lol.. it was just a joke.. I never expected you to actually add it in.. but here comes your man to the rescue. seems like he has anger issues, enjoy him while you can:)

Thats my poem:D

 

 

 
 
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