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''Crying out my pain'' (by sweetgeorgiapeachbbw)

 sweetgeorgiapeachbbw 
14-May-12 1:24 pm
I know not want i do i feel the empty pain my heart aches for truth i want so bad to cry out my pain its empty inside my heart i feel nothing left i feel the pain its theres no one can see it can you see my pain look into my eyes there it lays dont miss it its way deep in the inside dont you see my pain its crying out all inside me just look its there dont miss it

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
14-May-12 3:16 pm
Nice. I agree the pain of the heart .

 

 



Last edited by brats52005; 14-May-12 3:28 pm.
 
 
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