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Goodnight my love@missCHIE (by Tekton)

 Tekton 
13-Jan-13 5:24 am
As I am saying good night at the end of the day, And you are not here, but many miles away, My heart is so empty and so lonely inside, As I wipe away a tear I am trying to hide.

I close my eyes and try to go to sleep, But with the sadness inside I begin to weep. Suddenly I remember what you once said to me, Just meet me in the stars, waiting for you I will be.

When distance tends to keep us apart, Remember I still hold you near in my heart. When the night together, can't be ours, Just close your eyes and meet me in the stars.

Remembering those words, I begin to smile, And gently close my eyes, lessening the miles. I can see the stars, oh how beautifully arranged, But you are not there, no hug to exchange.

I sit alone waiting, with hope in my heart, No longer wanting to be kept apart. Suddenly in the distance, a shadow appears, A tear rolls down my face and the image is clear.

 

 

 
 
 anncleofaye 
13-Jan-13 5:46 am
aww that was sweet! i remember one of my friend on here who made alotta poem for his girl too :) u guys are pretty rare!

 

 

 
 
 Tekton 
13-Jan-13 5:48 am
@anncleofaye: Maraming salamat :))

 

 

 
 
 justbmyself (22)   (41 / F-MF / Zambia)
13-Jan-13 6:00 am
what would make this sweet is if she was on line and replied

 

 

 
 
 Tekton 
13-Jan-13 6:06 am
She's doing a schools project. She will reply to it :)

 

 

 
 
 anncleofaye 
13-Jan-13 6:30 am
@tekton: aww u already know how to speak tagalog! am glad and walang anuman :)

 

 

 
 
 JustMeAndYou77 (17)   (47 / F-M / Florida)
13-Jan-13 6:33 am
As I am saying good night at the end of the day, And you are not here, but many miles away, My heart is so empty and so lonely inside, As I wipe away a tear I am trying to hide.

I close my eyes and try to go to sleep, But with the sadness inside I begin to weep. Suddenly I remember what you once said to me, Just meet me in the stars, waiting for you I will be.

When distance tends to keep us apart, Remember I still hold you near in my heart. When the night together, can't be ours, Just close your eyes and meet me in the stars.

Remembering those words, I begin to smile, And gently close my eyes, lessening the miles. I can see the stars, oh how beautifully arranged, But you are not there, no hug to exchange.

I sit alone waiting, with hope in my heart, No longer wanting to be kept apart. Suddenly in the
This was a very nice and sweet poem to read. missCHIE is a wonderful girl and Im glad she's found a guy who compliments her! Good luck you two :)

 

 

 
 
 missCHIE (27)    (31 / F-MF / Philippines)
13-Jan-13 10:49 am
:) Hehe. Cherishable!

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
13-Jan-13 8:17 pm
Awe love it and misschie is a wonderful girl and deserves the beauty of these poems.

 

 

 
 
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