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The perfect day (by james85)

 james85 
11-Jan-13 10:34 pm
ive had a bit of writers block tbh, but after the events of today i had to pick up my poem pen

As the end of the perfect day draws near,
i have you on my mind dear,
we laughed, we shared tea, we kissed so sweetly
for now all my doubts are gone forever,
this feeling is what i was serching for,
i fly now higher than before, till the day we are together again

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
11-Jan-13 10:40 pm
Awe james that is beautiful.

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
11-Jan-13 10:43 pm
Oh my goodness James you are just toooo cute! Thank you for sharing your happiness with us!

 

 

 
 
 james85 
11-Jan-13 11:05 pm
thanks ladies :)

 

 

 
 
 Zigman (3)    (57 / M-F / Pennsylvania)
11-Jan-13 11:46 pm
@james85: Hmm....thatz pretty cool ! I like it james, keep up the good work son !!!

 

 

 
 
 Sammy2 
11-Jan-13 11:51 pm
Aw:) This just makes me smile w memories of my first love:) So happy you get to experience the exhilaration of love!:)

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
12-Jan-13 12:33 am
Aw:) This just makes me smile w memories of my first love:) So happy you get to experience the exhilaration of love!:)
oh this reminds me of that thread of Rams...bout wishing you cld experience it all over like it was the first time...and James really does make us wanna do it all over again....for the first time :^)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
12-Jan-13 4:56 am
yeah i know thanks everyone, until now love hasnt been a happy topic for me, and well i didnt think id find it again certinaly not in this way, i am seriously considering moving to England to be near her and there are slightly more job oppertunitys there (not much though)

 

 

 
 
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