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Would you let me die in pains and heart broke? (by lovablesweetyy)

 lovablesweetyy (6)       (37 / M-F / Nigeria)
18-Dec-12 1:23 am
Stretch forth your hand and hold to mine
as through this fog we go.
Endless as night in a borrowed dream
of one lost and deep in sorrow...

I see you not and I hear not your voice,
and yet I feel you so nearby.
It's just a dream - yes, always a dream -
unreachable for even you and I...

I know that I shall never know
why I met you this way.
Carrying this cross of burden along
knowing that here alone I must stay...

I cannot know, nor ever will see
why this path I know I need walk.
Without you here by my side to touch
and never given the chance to talk...

I close my eyes now and try to see
the reason why you have been.
A burning fire, an unquenchable desire
and so much more than just a friend...

A weight of pure sadness presses my soul
and tears flow where I cannot see.
For what I've so wanted and couldn't have
and what I knew never could be...

It was you who would visit my dreams
and you were unreachable for me then.
I was but a small child when I saw you,
but I knew I'd find you, my friend...

I was so sure when I was young that
when I did find you you'd be mine.
The thought never did enter my mind
that it would come too late in time...

I sit here with tears and
cannot think quite clear of what I
wanted to say. I just want you to know
that I never did doubt,
Yes... That I would find you again
Someday...

 

 

 
 
 LovelySummeRayne (7)   (31 / F-F / Louisiana)
18-Dec-12 2:17 am
very good, as always my friend.

 

 

 
 
 lovablesweetyy (6)       (37 / M-F / Nigeria)
18-Dec-12 2:34 am
very good, as always my friend.
thanks, nice to see you online.

 

 

 
 
 Theheath21 (0)    (33 / M-F / Florida)
18-Dec-12 2:59 am
Wow you write some great poetry.

 

 

 
 
 Sammy2 
9-Jan-13 4:10 am
Very pretty poem:)

 

 

 
 
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