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Love and fire (by LovelySummeRayne)

 LovelySummeRayne (7)   (31 / F-F / Louisiana)
14-Dec-12 2:58 am
Our love is like holding a hot coal, the more it burns the tighter we squeeze. And im down to the bone baby, cant you hear me scream? You burn away my mask and scorch my heart to blackest ash, i watch your Sun explode and wait for the flames to take me away from this cold cold place.

 

 

 
 
 PaulG7719 
14-Dec-12 3:27 am
that sounds...... like it burns lol.
nice poem

 

 

 
 
 LovelySummeRayne (7)   (31 / F-F / Louisiana)
14-Dec-12 3:49 am
thankya!

 

 

 
 
 butterfly6577 
14-Dec-12 3:50 am
that is a good poem

 

 

 
 
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