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"Together" (by ThatNerdyChick)

 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (30 / F-MF / Virginia)
26-Nov-12 12:13 am
My perpetual forever,
My enticing here and now,
My forgetful, my insightful,
The sad boy with wrinkled brow.
Will you see me? Will you listen?
Don't you know I'm always here?
Whispers whip right past your cheeks,
But not a word blows in your ear.
As I ponder my delusions,
Can I not warm his cold soul?
Something answers in my heart,
And with a kiss, I let him know.

//I wrote this so please don't steal it <3 :)

 

 



Last edited by ThatNerdyChick; 26-Nov-12 12:26 am.
 
 
 james85 
26-Nov-12 12:35 am
@ThatNerdyChick: this is really good!

 

 

 
 
 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (30 / F-MF / Virginia)
26-Nov-12 12:46 am
@james85: Thank you >u<

 

 

 
 
 anonymoususer321 
26-Nov-12 2:02 am
Cute. Nice writing!

 

 

 
 
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