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Rap song #1, dnt a title, unfinishd version of wats goin out in studio (by Derekj83)

 Derekj83 
5-Nov-12 10:24 pm
The air all around me is so dry, winter chills make your heart feel so cold, tears turn into ice crystals wen u cry, how come love always feels lik fools gold, this is the last time that i fold, gettin playd lik a game of cards is gettin old, my mind is always set on gettin nice things, but my pockets always has holes,

 

 

 
 
 flowergrl23 
5-Nov-12 10:34 pm
Nice :) I like it

 

 

 
 
 Soulprince (1)    (34 / M-F / Nigeria)
5-Nov-12 10:44 pm
oh heaven sav me.i neva knw it wil tak long 2 c her,c all day comin and hw far,my lif fel empty lik empty bar,oh am sad,tinkin of she so mad,no dis is bad,which she is 2 mak me fel weler see as i dey chiver just as if i got fever,lovin her lik how GOD lov simon peter,she is d rigt 1 i knw dis ever,and ready 2 b is soldier,watchin d cenema,goin 2 d media,i wich acept me and just 4llow me go 4eva

 

 

 
 
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