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Another poetry corner (by Awittyname)

 Awittyname (2)    (36 / M-F / Alabama)
28-Oct-12 11:34 am
You build me up to high i might let you down, making me feel lower than the ground, feel like diving in a bottle until i drown, or smoke a 50 sack until i sleep, got guns for the ones that try to creep, never been a b*tch cause nobody looked out for me, a stand alone complex is how i see, to weather these storms harder than a tree, made a cold hearted person out of me, but im too young to be looking back, even though this cold world wont cut me slack, gotta get harder than the hard sometimes its like that.

 

 

 
 
 forever 
28-Oct-12 11:41 am
@Awittyname: i got something better then that^

 

 

 
 
 Awittyname (2)    (36 / M-F / Alabama)
28-Oct-12 11:48 am
Yeah so do i but it was more about conveying feeling more so the intellect. Besides i wrote it when thinking about blueberry yum yum for some reason it just flowed out that way, not my first time to f something. Lol

 

 

 
 
 forever 
28-Oct-12 12:00 pm
@Awittyname: small though i am. Mighty is my spirt! When bloody battle calls come at me with what you will.. Shoot me, stab me, kill me a hundred way's still i fight off! I am eternal as the sun!!! I am a thousand demons from hell. death and destruction are my game... Aganie is my name

 

 



Last edited by forever; 28-Oct-12 12:06 pm.
 
 
 Awittyname (2)    (36 / M-F / Alabama)
28-Oct-12 12:06 pm
nice one, forcfull delivery system i must say.

 

 

 
 
 forever 
28-Oct-12 12:16 pm
@Awittyname: we gotta get some more ppl in on this

 

 

 
 
 Awittyname (2)    (36 / M-F / Alabama)
28-Oct-12 12:25 pm
The gun clicks next to your head, feel embarassed in knowing your not dead, load the cannon again to take another shot, hear someone knocking you feel the thickening plot, just like nobody understands you wrong, its youve been here to d*nm long, were they failed you will succeed, now get back on your f*cking knees

 

 

 
 
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