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You broke me (by james85)

 james85 
27-Oct-12 3:52 pm
well i had a bit of writer's block, but the events of the past 5 days made me write my new poem:
You broke me for i let you
You broke me like no other
I'm stronger now
Thanks to the special people in my life
Special people that you can never break
That's why i fight and what i fight for
Not only for me but for them too
That's why i'll never been broken again

 

 

 
 
 Urmohlorlah (1)    (33 / F-M / Nigeria)
27-Oct-12 4:08 pm
Yeah,sure

 

 

 
 
 Aldo420 
27-Oct-12 4:49 pm
I'm not big on poetry but nice piece

 

 

 
 
 james85 
27-Oct-12 5:05 pm
@Aldo420: thank you

 

 

 
 
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