Its hrd to c other people in pain, this girl is crying, she got kickd outa her own crib in the poorin rain, if i had wings id carry u away and strt flying, tk the plug outa this drain, so ur tears strt drying, ur parents r fkin insane, drinks on me and im buying, i cn c y u count the days lik the myan, its hrd living wit relatives, tht call the cops on u and strt lying, she said the hell wit this, im movin into ur apartment, then she askd y ur so sensitive, as she lookd into my glove compartment, saw a pic of us and fell in love wit it, i said its hrd dealing wit a crises, wen youve been beat to ****, or even witnessd it, it hurts me to kno youve been hurt, it gts me pissd, they treat u lik dirt, no 1 deserves to get wipped, she drank herself drunk and said this **** isnt rite, strtd to flip, as i guided her to the door tht nite, as she strtd to tk 1 more sip, i held her tight, put my hand on the bottle, brought it dwn and said plz dnt fite, lik easin off the throttle b4 the plane tks flight, her eyes nw blinded from this light, as i lay her dwn to rest, just dnt forget ill always b ur knight.

i loved it thnx for tht i really needed to hear that

That's a solid 10.. Beautiful

@logan11: Thnx alot man! and no prob ;)

@yesman777: haha thnx bro!!

I like it bro ;)

@cloud1WH: Thnx bro! ;)

Wow very good young man. Keep writing i like it:D