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Life Gets Messy (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 7:24 pm
(truly can't remember if I posted the next few yet...
but I looked back through and it appears I have not,
but if I did, oops. this is my rambling introduction...
moving on)
I sometimes befriend people who turn out to be jerks...
and when their true colors show,
I feel it deeply, and I normally write it out,
so here is what I wrote after one such time...
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and one day I hope
we can look back at this
and laugh
and say
that was the time
it almost all fell apart…
but deep down
in my heart,
I didn't think
we'll ever get that far
So I said my goodbyes to you,
packed my bag
and left into the night.
Made my escape from reality,
found myself in a bottle of Alcohol.
The day I cried my eyes out,
because you think so low of me
So this is goodbye,
my use-to-be friend,
in the end…
you're nothing more
than a bitter memory

 

 

 
 
 james85 
21-Oct-12 7:42 pm
aww so sad, and of course good :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 7:46 pm
@james85: thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 heikeva (69)   (60 / F-M / Bayern)
21-Oct-12 8:44 pm
aww so sad, and of course good :)
I agree.....

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
21-Oct-12 8:47 pm
@heikeva: thanks. it was a kind of bittersweet thing, at the time. I wrote another two after this one about the same person. lmao.

 

 

 
 
 heikeva (69)   (60 / F-M / Bayern)
21-Oct-12 8:53 pm
@mrb89: Lol i like sweet, dont like the bitter....gotta run, back to work! Great poems as always, thanx! ;)

 

 

 
 
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