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A Cute Poem For A Cute Girl (by TheRealSasukeUchiha)

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 TheRealSasukeUchiha 
19-Oct-12 10:21 pm
You changed my world with a blink of an eye That is something that I can not deny You put my soul from worst to best That is why I treasure you my dearest Marites

You just don't know what you have done for me You even pushed me to the best that I can be You really are an angel sent from above To take care of me and shower with love

When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear And your touch have chased away all of my fear You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile It is even better everytime you smile

It so magical those things you've made To bring back my faith that almost fade Now my life is a dream come true It all began when I was loved by you

Now I have found what I am looking for It's you and your love and nothing more Cause you have given me this feeling of contentment In my life something I've never felt

I wish I could talk 'til the end of day But now I'm running out of things to say So I'll end by the line you already know "I LOVE YOU" more than what I could sho

 

 

 
 
 flowergrl23 
19-Oct-12 10:54 pm
Awww I love it

 

 

 
 
 mommyoftwo2008 (7)    (35 / F-M / Washington)
19-Oct-12 11:04 pm
i love it its a tear jerker i wish you the best of luck :)

 

 

 
 
 cloud1WH 
19-Oct-12 11:09 pm
Wow! Bravo!!! great poem!

 

 

 
 
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