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You Gotta Tell Me (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
1-Sep-12 9:20 pm
(forgot I wrote this a while back... but here it is now)
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You gotta respect me enough
To tell me what you're thinking.
You gotta tell me if you wanna walk away
You gotta say what you want,
But mostly:
You gotta actually talk to me.
Words make relationships go.
So you wanna walk?
Say it.
So you wanna stay?
Show it.
Cause I don't do second place,
Or second best.
I'm not a second kinda girl.
You want me?
I'm yours.
But you gotta say it.
I'm not gonna wait forever.
I haven't got all day.
So say it.
Tell me:
What are we to you?
This is not my saying stay,
This is me saying:
Say the words you're thinking.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
1-Sep-12 9:24 pm
@mrb89:this is so good, im writing another poem (a longer one) so i hope to post it soon. im taking more time with this one

 

 

 
 
 cookie123 (5)   (57 / M-F / Scotland)
1-Sep-12 9:25 pm
My hounesty... star wars is good but pls change ur T shirt.. ppl get the rite and wrong vid...

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
1-Sep-12 9:26 pm
@james85: thank you :) and yay! I'll be waiting for it :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
1-Sep-12 9:27 pm
My hounesty... star wars is good but pls change ur T shirt.. ppl get the rite and wrong vid...
O.o this confuses me a little. lol

 

 

 
 
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