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First love poem lol (by james85)

 james85 
17-Aug-12 7:14 pm
Ive always wanted
to write a love poem for my special lady and well here it is be gentle
its the first time ive written one oh and the second verse
are lyrics of one of my fav songs:
You gave me light where there was darkness.
You give me joy absolute.
For you accept me for who i am.
And you're my darling angel.
I dont have much in this world.
But i have you.
And thats what gives me strength.
To even know that i will meet you.
I never will hurt you.

I keep the love you gave me alive.
And now i carry it with me.
Telling me i'll never be alone.
I know you are right there.
I always will love you.

 

 

 
 
 lovablesweety 
17-Aug-12 7:16 pm
@james85: nice one. smiles

 

 

 
 
 james85 
17-Aug-12 7:23 pm
@lovablesweety: thanks sir

 

 

 
 
 Swordsman 
17-Aug-12 8:08 pm
Im no poet but that is pretty good.

 

 

 
 
 shazbee27 (2)   (39 / F-M / England)
17-Aug-12 8:11 pm
That's very sweet

 

 

 
 
 james85 
17-Aug-12 8:12 pm
@Swordsman: thanks sir, you dont have to be a poet to appricate poetry jmo

 

 

 
 
 Swordsman 
17-Aug-12 8:15 pm
Thats very true.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
17-Aug-12 8:19 pm
@shazbee27: thanks sweetheart i mean every word

 

 

 
 
 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (30 / F-MF / Virginia)
21-Aug-12 4:47 pm
Very sweet. ^-^

 

 

 
 
 james85 
21-Aug-12 6:33 pm
@ThatNerdyChick: lol thanks :)

 

 

 
 
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