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A New Song (by EbonyRoses119)

 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 1:24 am
Whe you think its your end
Youve had enough
No more last stands
Gun
Bottle
Noose
Knife
All look better than Risking life
You think youre done
Youve hd enough
Just remember
You dont Have to jump
Tomorrw has a Different song
You may think youre right today, but
Tomorrow youre Wrong

 

 

 
 
 rayminton49 
25-Jul-12 1:41 am
Pretty good.

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 1:45 am
Lol thanks ^.^" I wrote it a while ago and thought What the Hell

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
25-Jul-12 2:31 am
Cool. I could definitely see one of the young popular bands singing this. Thanks for sharing with us. :)

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 2:36 am
Alynn
Awwwwwwwww! That was actually a very very nice compliment c: Thank you ^.^

 

 

 
 
 OFWGKTA (13)    (30 / F-M / Florida)
25-Jul-12 2:46 am
I really like this.....it's very inspiring. It makes me feel like it's about never giving up.

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 2:48 am
Lol, thank you ^.^ I wrote it after some good sense was knocked into me lol

 

 

 
 
 itz93kleezy 
25-Jul-12 2:50 am
Da*mm gurl xD
i see yuhh xD

i like it,
it woulda helped mii threw sum ruff timez..

i said,

body wont move,
so i gotta force it.
wanna give up,
but still wont forfit.. xD

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
25-Jul-12 2:59 am
kleezy
Lol, I like yours, and thank you c:

 

 

 
 
 itz93kleezy 
25-Jul-12 3:04 am
Netime xD

yuhh kinda remind me of mi lil cuz' btw lol

 

 

 
 
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