Thread: I'll think of a title later:

I'll think of a title later: (by mrb89)

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mrb89
24-Jul-12 12:38 pm

Just finished writing this... so thought I would share.
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Melt my heart of ice,
And break these chains
Around my soul.
Look at me and let me know,
I’m the only thing on your mind.
Make me believe in love again.
Take my hand and guide me
Home to you.
Let me know you’re true.
Break down my defenses
And slip inside my mind.
Take me as you’ve found me,
Accept my flaws:
Because baby this is me.
I’ll unearth my secrets from the dead,
And I’ll share my heart on my sleeve,
Just for you.

james85
24-Jul-12 12:43 pm

Really, really nice, thanks for sharing once again :)

mrb89
24-Jul-12 12:44 pm

@james85: as always you're welcome :)
it is always my pleasure to share with people... since most of these are kept to myself lol

alynn
24-Jul-12 12:45 pm

Very cool :D I'm always excited to see some poetry *hops up and down* thanks for sharing!

mrb89
24-Jul-12 12:47 pm

@alynn: no problem... it's what started me on the forums to begin with... posting my poems. I have to have like twenty on here now... or more O.o

alynn
24-Jul-12 12:52 pm

Quoted Post:

it's what started me on the forums to begin with... posting my poems. I have to have like twenty on here now... or more O.o

Really? I'm going to have to dig through and check those out :D I wish this writing section would pop up under 'New Posts' every other day lol.

mrb89
24-Jul-12 12:55 pm

@alynn Lol. if you click my name, and threads... it'll show all the threads I have made.... I try and write a little every day, so as I get things done and written, I do post them... but it takes me time lol

james85
24-Jul-12 1:01 pm

I think ive read most of the poems there :) alynn id like to see it too, and of course i havent wrote one in a while but try my best for my poetry friends, i did write some while you were off

mrb89
24-Jul-12 1:03 pm

@james you bein my #1 fan and all... I do try and get them written an on here in the same day, the ideas are lacking right now for me... well save this one... it came to me pretty fast when I was talking to a friend going through relationship issues, made me think: if I could say something to the person I will one day be dating, what would it be? and well... here ya go lol

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james85
24-Jul-12 1:11 pm

@mrb89: lol, well im honored to be your number 1 fan, and at the minute im just reading lyrics of that band i told you about, they have a new song out which is cool. sort of looking for inspiration at the moment

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