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Once more (by lookin4luv2)

 lookin4luv2 
4-Aug-14 11:45 am
I can feel my heart breaking from deep inside
I'm on my knees i swallow my pride Before you leave before your gone
I want you to know without you i can't go on
You're the sun in my sky each day
The clouds fill the sky since you went away
I hear your voice wisper sweet dreams I close my eyes and wish you next to me
And tomarrow when I'm early to rise The tears will return and fill my eyes
If only i had one more day
perhaps i could convince you to stay

 

 



Last edited by lookin4luv2; 4-Aug-14 11:52 am.
 
 
 impeccablesossy (33)   (36 / F-MF / Nigeria)
4-Aug-14 12:27 pm
Hmmmmm....lovely

 

 

 
 
 5150 
4-Aug-14 6:11 pm
I can feel my heart breaking from deep inside
I'm on my knees i swallow my pride Before you leave before your gone
I want you to know without you i can't go on
You're the sun in my sky each day
The clouds fill the sky since you went away
I hear your voice wisper sweet dreams I close my eyes and wish you next to me
And tomarrow when I'm early to rise The tears will return and fill my eyes
If only i had one more day
perhaps i could convince you to stay
is this about what you and i talked about?

 

 

 
 
 lookin4luv2 
5-Aug-14 2:38 pm
@5150: yep

 

 

 
 
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