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I Wait (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
22-Jun-12 11:55 pm
I've missed you like crazy.
I've craved your arms around me.
I've felt your presence in my dreams.
I've seen your face everywhere.
I've needed you here.
I've cried for you.
I wait for you.
Even now,
After all this time,
I wait.

 

 

 
 
 farmboymelvin (-3)  (34 / M-F / Minnesota)
25-Jun-12 10:59 am
Sounds like the story of a kind heart person

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
25-Jun-12 6:32 pm
Thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 samstone (0)  (52 / M-F / South Carolina)
25-Jun-12 11:02 pm
Still feel that way about my late wife, she has been gone for eight years now and at times i find myself still waiting. Once again you have captured the essence of raw emotion, well done

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
25-Jun-12 11:38 pm
Thank you :)

 

 

 
 
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