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I'm Broken (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
19-Jun-12 1:41 am
Since I posted the last one, I thought I would share the other two:

I need to let it out,
just scream it for the world to hear.
But then I remember
that's not what I was taught to do,
no,
I was taught to lie and fake it.
So now when I need that escape,
I can't take it:
and it's breaking me up
and tearing me up
from the inside
I just need to let it go:
let it out
and set myself
free from your lies
from the pain you caused me
from the lies I told myself
to survive your twisted game.
I hope you're happy now?
this smile plastered on my face
is the slow death
of my sick heart.
I can't take this anymore,
I just wanna let it out,
but I don't know how.
How can you fix what's broken?
When what's broken
is what would fix you?

 

 

 
 
 heikeva (69)   (60 / F-M / Bayern)
19-Jun-12 1:47 am
Wow i love it i could have used that and said that 2 my ex but iam over him and he is in the past........good job..;p-

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
19-Jun-12 1:48 am
Lol. thank you :)

 

 

 
 
 rachelle04 (1)    (40 / F-F / Texas)
19-Jun-12 2:03 am
Sounds so good

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
19-Jun-12 2:09 am
Thank you

 

 

 
 
 rachelle04 (1)    (40 / F-F / Texas)
19-Jun-12 3:55 am
Your welcome

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
19-Jun-12 4:10 am
Oh OP, Can I borrow this poem and send it to someone who breaks my heart :( ...

I love it too !

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
19-Jun-12 4:15 am
Yes feel free
Thank you :D

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
19-Jun-12 4:21 am
Are you sure? I'm SERIOUSSSSS :D

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
19-Jun-12 4:23 am
Yes I am, I don't mind :)

 

 

 
 
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