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Broken Hearted (by RizaDeadEye)

 RizaDeadEye (7)    (30 / F-MF / California)
1-Apr-13 2:04 am
I' ll be ok, I'll be ok
Even though my heart was broken today
Just keep on walkin' with my head held high
Don't ask myself why
Why it all went wrong
It's been so long
Since I felt this pain
Never thought I'd feel it again
But now I know
That no matter where I go Heartbreak will always follow
I gave him my heart and my secrets
And the key to my heart in hopes he would keep it
But now I realize I was wrong
And that somewhere far along
He lost his love for me
It died so unexpectedly
So I've locked my heart in a steel chest so never again will it be taken
It's missing so many pieces from the many times its been broken
Under lock and key I will hold it for eternity
But, I won't forget it and I hope someday soon
He'll regret it and look up at the moon
And take his key and turn the lock
And say to me, "I want to turn back the clock."
But I know its for never For there is no together
So the only heart I will hold is my own
Ice cold and now made of stone

 

 



Last edited by RizaDeadEye; 1-Apr-13 2:05 am.
 
 
 justbmyself (22)   (40 / F-MF / Zambia)
1-Apr-13 2:14 am
@RizaDeadEye: intense feelings here. I want to tel u something better out there 4 u but rit now wont mean much.

 

 

 
 
 justbmyself (22)   (40 / F-MF / Zambia)
1-Apr-13 2:15 am
just take care,and giv it tim to heal

 

 

 
 
 mitosis 
1-Apr-13 2:38 am
That's true girl, go out of home or places and things that will remind you of him and allow your heart to heal totally. Never rush to be in another date cos it will increase your sorrows. Don't be idle to make it worse but be engaged with a hobby to keep your mind from your pains. There's hope for the future.

 

 

 
 
 mitosis 
1-Apr-13 2:50 am
Miss Riza, your story reminds me of 3years ago when a lady broke my heart some few days to my final exams. I really wept for the first time in the presence of my female pal. You see, tears may come but only a friend can help in healing and joining the pieces of your heart together but you must take up the mandate to let bygones be bygones and gradually forge ahead. Never develop the perception that every guy is the same; this is what is making me suffer the more, cry the more. Please pull yourself togethe
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 RizaDeadEye (7)    (30 / F-MF / California)
1-Apr-13 4:24 am
Thank you. Im glad that u guys care its just I felt like he was my Romeo, I guess I wasn't his Juliet

 

 

 
 
 Teemah (0)   (35 / F-M / Nigeria)
1-Apr-13 7:12 am
Broken ups cant make you stop being who you are,it only makes you better.am still in that shoe,we will be fine.better days ahead!

 

 

 
 
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