It's been 14 years since I last saw her. My first victim left two days in the dessert 1 mile off the highway. The look on her face was the stuff of nightmares, her eyes wide open her hands clenched together, as if she witnessed something horrible. Her name was Donna Ann Miller the heiress of a weathy business man. She was loved by many hated by none. Even though she had all the money in the world she still found time to help the needy. Her father on the other hand was known to swindel people buy people out of business and much more. It was Because of his shoty pass that lead me to guess this was some kind of vendetta. I remeber My ex partner said "When it comes to kidnapping and murder from a wealthy family you just gotta follow the money its all about the money". Yeah but this case, this case didnt add up there was no ransom no demand as a matter of fact this person died three days after the kidnapping. The case went cold. For years I managed to forget the face. At home I laid my head to catch some rest.suddenly a strange knocking was at my door. When I opened it the knocker was gone. But left before me was a covered portrait. I examined making sure it wad no cruel joke left either my ex friends or some ex con trying to plot some crazy revenge trap. I brought into my home and it took me A while before I decided to unwrap it. Quickly I ripped the paper cover, and there it was a painting of Donnas face screaming in agony. Suddenly I clenched my heart trying to stop the heavy pounding but instead I blacked out.....

@Rainbowbutterfly: No actually I kinda freestyled it. Wrote whatever popped in my head. Why did you like it?

Yeah, i like short story tackles about ghost, white lady , anything superficial...wow! It was well written, very creative :)

But i don't like the guy's job in the story :)

Do you write short story?

Right now I'm working on getting into both the graphic novel field and film directing. Question who's name do you see as the person responsible for this story. Because I see a different name I don't know how that happened. I already reported it in must be a glitch.

OMG!, yes, it became different now but earlier it was under your username! Sometimes it does happen but since you reported it , it'll fix sooner. Admin is just around the corner watching like an angel :) . That's cool, I wish you the best of luck. You rock :D