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Torn (poem) (by Cassibear)

 Cassibear 
30-Apr-12 6:21 am
You were everything I thought I wanted but in the end you were nothing at all
You were never there to catch me you just stood and watched me fall
You were the one my destiny I thought u were on my side I guess you were just playing games I know you love to watch me cry
You get lonely thats when you need me but when there's a choice I get left behind you use my love for you against me and you win every single time
You tell me that you need me and to an extent I guess thats true but you dont know what love is I could never do these things to you
Now you swear that its over that you will finely set me free but to be sure I pull the trigger now I stole what you stole from me.....</3

 

 

 
 
 Elhefe (Banned)
30-Apr-12 6:27 am
Wow when we get our heart ripped out our chest i love i mean love for someone take all that pain and make it art great job

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
30-Apr-12 6:27 am

 

 

 
 
 Slutclown (0)    (44 / M-F / Washington)
30-Apr-12 6:46 am
I know how you feel my ex left me 6 times in a week before I got out of jail and replaced me with another man and it was my choice to go to jail to stop probation from running my life that hurt now I have a son I don't see cause it just to hard to look at her and think I worng to think she was the one

 

 

 
 
 Elhefe (Banned)
30-Apr-12 6:56 am
VEry intresting profile name what kind of girl are you looking for

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes1211 
30-Apr-12 8:31 am
Very beautiful and touching poem....i could definently say ive felt that way myself

 

 

 
 
 Rainbowbutterfly 
30-Apr-12 9:00 am
How powerful words are to describe emotions! :)

 

 

 
 
 Cassibear 
30-Apr-12 12:46 pm
Thankyou everyone at first I have 2 admit I was a little scared of putting one of my poems up and showing everyone how I feel but now im not so worried about it

 

 

 
 
 Slutclown (0)    (44 / M-F / Washington)
3-May-12 9:12 pm
@Elhefe: Well right now I'm looking to hook up or actually get a good relationship going. I just got out of jail and I've been locked up for 6 months so I'm looking for someone who likes it rough

 

 

 
 
 darrensmith0191 (0)   (45 / M-F / England)
3-May-12 10:23 pm
Sweet and touching poem

 

 

 
 
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