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My first rap dont judge me lol (by KaylaDontCare92)
(32 / F-MF / New York)Ooh ooh its a murder scene
Ya girl Krissy done wiped it clean
Im wanted by some hated by many
How come it seems like only fake b*tches try to be-friend me?
They must think i have no back bone
See im Sly like da actor Stone
Oh my its a bird no its a plane
Nah its none of those just a new girl spittin neva a lame
Most of my family hates me :/
Is it because i choose to be free
Or is it because the things I've done in the past
Yeah it may seem like im an a$$
But Im only like this because of the things i've been through
Yeah it tought me not to believe in a person like you
Lemme fall back calm down
Cuz you see no matter how much you dis-like it I'll always be around ;]
Okay sooo yeah umm lol comment on what u think of it im open to critisim just dont hurt my feelings -_- lml :)
Ya girl Krissy done wiped it clean
Im wanted by some hated by many
How come it seems like only fake b*tches try to be-friend me?
They must think i have no back bone
See im Sly like da actor Stone
Oh my its a bird no its a plane
Nah its none of those just a new girl spittin neva a lame
Most of my family hates me :/
Is it because i choose to be free
Or is it because the things I've done in the past
Yeah it may seem like im an a$$
But Im only like this because of the things i've been through
Yeah it tought me not to believe in a person like you
Lemme fall back calm down
Cuz you see no matter how much you dis-like it I'll always be around ;]
Okay sooo yeah umm lol comment on what u think of it im open to critisim just dont hurt my feelings -_- lml :)
The begining was good bout mid-way it seemed it went a different direction. But Im not a rap fan... so I may not be the best critic for this. Mine wasn't great lol
Im no rap fan but not to shabby. Prolly sound better hearin it haha
@April666: I agree :/ i was reading it and i was like "o_O i lost it i went too deep" but thanks for pointing it out
The beginning was tight,raps my life,its just me ,california made me that way,,rock and rap
@CALIFORNIADREAMIN: :D thanks i always have strong beginnigs but i fall off becuz i have "writers block" :/
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