I try to build this mountain, I try, so hard, you doubt.
I try to build up bridges, I fail, again, fall out.
I try to make this better, I aim, I miss,
heartbroken.
I try to turn my life around, things always end up,
unspoken.

Wow that is beautiful & I can see it tells a story of how u love your mother and try your best to make her happy and proud....but some parts seem to me like you're trying to say sometimes she doesn't see it or understand.

@vampdoll: this is a great poem, its heartfelt, and to my mum: i love and miss you so much but watch me go my own way.

Omg exactly. I am a self harmer since I was 12 and she has never understood and although I've not done it in nearly 6 months, she thinks its been over a year. Wish I could make her understand but I've tried and she doesn't.

Wow! what a fantastic poem thanks for sharing

Thanks a lot @ aldo. Been writing poems 16 years but I've only told any one on here any of them. So I appreciate the compliment :)

I've read a couple others your very good