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The prey (by unwound)

 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
9-Jun-12 3:12 pm
All evening,I watched you across the room,sorting you out from others that have passed my way. In all your exquisite beauty,alluring eyes,beckoning lips,a moment of terror,excitement,shows on your face. A hunger within me again takes its place. Like a crouching lion,I wait and wait. The crowd thins,I begin hunting my prey. Slowly lurking behind you,hearing my breathing,a deep throaty growl,your aware of me,closer I prowl. Quivering ,you shake,not knowing when,maybe a matter of seconds ,what move I will make. I devour the sight of you,for you I can not wait,I spring upon you,lustful longing desire from you I take.

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
9-Jun-12 3:15 pm
Hmmmm this one is a lil different, but i like it

 

 

 
 
 kowboy2477 
9-Jun-12 3:25 pm
Nice!!!!! Almost makes me want to be huntedd lol

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
9-Jun-12 3:33 pm
Yes very interesting and good.

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
9-Jun-12 3:54 pm
@kowboy2477: Lol,thank ya but I only hunt certain prey:-D

 

 

 
 
 kowboy2477 
9-Jun-12 3:55 pm
@unwound: LMAO...i just meant in general... we play on the same team brother lol

 

 

 
 
 4everthe1 
9-Jun-12 4:28 pm
@kowboy lmfao

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
9-Jun-12 4:37 pm
@kowboy2477: and @unwound....u two cracked me up! but I know what u mean Kowboy....does make one wanna feel 'hunted' don't it?

 

 

 
 
 kowboy2477 
9-Jun-12 4:59 pm
Well I did But now I don't know if I'm allowed to say that anymore lmao

 

 

 
 
 unwound (2)  (56 / M-F / Missouri)
9-Jun-12 5:17 pm
@kowboy2477: I knew what you meant,just joshing you,maybe you'll be somebodys "prey" but give her one hell of chase,then oh my watch out! Lol

 

 

 
 
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