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This Isn't a Love Story (by mrb89)

 mrb89 
4-Jul-13 8:47 pm
It’s hard to see my own reflection
Through a broken mirror,
When the tears in my eyes are falling.
Sick of feeling so damn tired.
Sick of feeling so damn upset.
Sick of feeling anything towards
You at all. Because I know you’re not
Giving me a second thought.

I hate to hear the words
‘You’re so strong for doing what you are’
Because if I had any strength at all
I’d have walked away sooner…
And if you don’t know the whole
Story, every little twist and turn
That it took to bring me to this point
Don’t even try to assume you know
What is on my mind.

I’ve been down to the bottom,
All because of you
But I have been building up a shelter,
Even if it is built upon,
Broken glass and rocky ground,
So that I can hide my pain away in it.

I’ve come too far to let anyone
Knock me down again.
But don’t think it’s killing me
Inside to walk away like this…
But it’s funny,
Every step away from you
Makes it easier to breathe
Then it has been in years.

-wrote this about my sister, but couldn't think of a better title lol-

 

 

 
 
 lace38 
4-Jul-13 8:54 pm
@mrb89: i love it..

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
4-Jul-13 8:57 pm
@mrb89: i love it..
thanks, I've been working on a few variations of it for the past few days. lol.

 

 



Last edited by mrb89; 4-Jul-13 8:57 pm.
 
 
 lace38 
4-Jul-13 9:01 pm
@mrb89: i love it..
thanks, I've been working on a few variations of it for the past few days. lol.
its perfect lil sister thank you for sharein it

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
4-Jul-13 9:15 pm
@lace38: no problem any time :) lol

 

 

 
 
 james85 
4-Jul-13 9:58 pm
@mrb89: wow great as always. you are on a roll megs lol

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
4-Jul-13 10:15 pm
@james85: thank you buddy :)
when I am upset and pis.sed I do a lot of writing. I am better at writing how I feel and think in poems then just saying it (or writing it) outright.

 

 

 
 
 Zilya777 
4-Jul-13 10:17 pm
@mrb89: I felt that one. :/ Very good.

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
4-Jul-13 10:19 pm
@Zilya777: thank you. I think we all have, over one thing or another at one point in time.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
4-Jul-13 10:33 pm
@mrb89: im the same megs, although dont like seeing my friends p'd off or sad. but i know you be ok :hugs:

 

 

 
 
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