All Forums >> General >> Stories, Poems & Creative Writing

I cried (by HonestAndCaring65)

 HonestAndCaring65 
16-May-13 10:49 pm
Today I did a lot of thinking and a lot of crying.
And if you all think they were tears for a man you be lying.
Because I promised myself no man is worth crying for.
So you can stop laughing and walk out this forum door.
I cried for all the people I've lost and miss every day.
I cried knowing how people can be so cruel with the words they say.
I cried because people take life for granted and don't even care.
I cried because falling inlove is something I don't wanna fear .
I cried because people don't care about hurting others.
I cried for all the women who can't have kids and want to be mother's.
I cried for all the people who search for love and just get hurt & pain.
I cried because my tears are hidden by the rain.
I cried because I waited so long to find some one to love .
I cried knowing if I did I just push him away with a shove.
I cried because I do have feelings and a big heart .
I cried knowing not all people get to have a chance and a fresh start

 

 



Last edited by HonestAndCaring65; 16-May-13 10:49 pm.
 
 
 Brian76 
16-May-13 10:51 pm
Very nice

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
16-May-13 10:52 pm
@Brian76: thank you Brian :-)

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
16-May-13 11:43 pm
Maybe I should stop writing my poems seems like no one really looks at them here lol but the web site I put them on everyone enjoys them so don't matter to me if I write them here or not. :-)

 

 

 
 
 lonelymomof2 
16-May-13 11:45 pm
@HonestAndCaring65: very beautifully written i cried reading this.. It really hit home...

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
16-May-13 11:46 pm
Don't stop posting. I know for a fact several read and just don't comment. All ur poems are great, might "intimidate" others by how good they are lol

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
16-May-13 11:47 pm
@HonestAndCaring65: very beautifully written i cried reading this.. It really hit home...
. Thank you soooo much I have others on here too :-)

 

 

 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
16-May-13 11:48 pm
@Briteeyes: Awwwww thank you :-)

 

 

 
 
 gaFoster3 
17-May-13 12:00 am
You already know how I feel. :) @honestandcaring65

 

 



Last edited by gaFoster3; 17-May-13 12:02 am.
 
 
 HonestAndCaring65 
17-May-13 12:01 am
@gaFoster3: thank you yes I do :-)

 

 

 
 
Quick reply:

[Smilies]

RULES:
  • Be respectful at all times.
  • Be mature and act like an adult.
  • Respect different points of view.
  • Discuss ideas, not specific users.
  • Don't get personal.
  • No profanity.
  • No drama.
  • No thread hijacking.
  • No trolling.
  • No spamming.
  • No soliciting.
  • No duplicate posting.
  • No posting in the wrong section.
  • No posting of contact information.
  • Be welcoming to new users.
Repeated violations of the above will result in increasing temporary bans from the forum and an eventual permanent ban from the site. Basically, just be friendly and neighborly and all will be well.
Similar threads:
Top
Home
Give us feedback!

Login:

* Username:

* Password:

 Remember me


Forgot?