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Fall in love with a Crow part 1 (by AwkwardPandaSneeze)

 AwkwardPandaSneeze (3)   (31 / F-M / Maine)
24-Dec-12 7:01 pm
This is a story I made when I was younger

Chapter 1
I woke up with cold sweat running down my body. That dream again. Since I was young I've had a dream about a boy crying and running I tried to catch up but he always disappeared before I could reach him.
I got up from my bed looking around. It was dark outside the sun slightly peeking up over the mountains. I sighed. Just another ordinary day. I made my bed and went to the bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror as I put the toothbrush in my mouth. Same light brown hair, same dark brown eyes and same creamy skin color, I thought to myself.
"Ren!!!!'' I heard my friend calling me from outside. I washed my mouth and brushes my long soft hair quickly as I put on my school uniform.
"Coming" I said to myself as I got my bag and ran outside.
It was snowing it looked so beautiful out, as I stood mesmerized my friend pouted.
"Reeeeeeennnn " I quickly looked back at her. She had blue eyes and short blond hair that was just above her shoulder her cheeks pink as always."Yes?" I answered casually.
Suddenly something black flew past me, my eyes widened as I look up at a beautiful Raven with crimson red eyes, I only had fractions of a second to indulge I'm it's beauty.


So what do you guys think so far? ^-^

 

 

 
 
 rigger 
24-Dec-12 7:32 pm
keep going its good, and i dont read much lol

 

 

 
 
 crickett18769 
24-Dec-12 8:47 pm
keep going i like it i want to hear more

 

 

 
 
 james85 
24-Dec-12 9:36 pm
yep i like it! now to read part 2 :D

 

 

 
 
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