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The Message (by Gator8282)

 Gator8282 (0)    (41 / M-F / Georgia)
8-Nov-12 6:24 am
Most people did not know- She did not share the truth, so when his time came most were without words. She spent most of her time with him saying all the things she never had before. He made her a promise and she did the same. The day came when the angels came for him and his last words were... " Tell her dont be late" and he smiled. Everyone looked when she walked in and a tear fell from her eye when the words were repeated and she turned to go out to the backyard. She went and sat for a moment on the swing. She took out the telescope and with an eager smile looked to the stars... Her heart fluttered and the tears flowed, for when she looked to the sky... The message was all to clear. Across the sky she read- Written in the stars for only her eyes to see..." I am with you always"!!!

 

 



Last edited by Gator8282; 8-Nov-12 6:37 am.
 
 
 Loversfirstkiss 
8-Nov-12 6:39 am
wow. That actually brings back memoeies...but then thats what art is for yes? To provoke thoughts and emotions ppl are almost scared to admit they have. A+

 

 

 
 
 zidourn 
8-Nov-12 7:33 am
a very deeply written art. Worth reading.

 

 

 
 
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