Ive been writing poems id like to.turn into songs. But please give me your opinions on this. I know its a bit depressin.


Smoke filled lungs, a drunken haze. I havent slept in 4 days. Ive seen the sunrise and sunset. My soul is torn and i bet, somewhere inside theres a peace. Ohhh but its bitter sweet. I mourn the loss of some close friends. I regret alot of **** ive done. And cant take back some of the ways ive been. My demons seem to have won. I fight myself everyday. Oh some of the things i say. My only love is this cigarette. Burns my lungs but helps me forget. The pain i feel the tears ive cried. Nobody can say i havent tried. I ****in tried.

i like it :)

me to not bad

Thanks. Been a rough couple of weeks

Yea thats preti gud bo alot ov ppl will relate to it if u make it into a song :)

Lol. Im working on it. Got a basic idea for the music just gotta get the band together

i think it rocks. Sounds like it comes from your heart n that probly sucks but thats where good music cums from..turn it into a rap song..it rocks

Im not really into rap. :/ i respect. I prefer country and punk rock. Parts of it may end up being screamed

That is a realy gud idea. Bkoz ive done it got up and proformed it and got realy gud feed bak and even got offered a job az a mixer and got suggested 2 bekom a producer lol

im wantin to start playin. Im gonna post one of my country songs. Tell me what ya think