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My Mind (by LaDawn1974)

 LaDawn1974 
19-Apr-12 2:35 am
I have a mind like a rocky mountain,
It is hazardous at times,
And full of jagged rocks,
But if you care to climb it,
And make it to the top,
The view is amazing,
And worth the trip!

 

 

 
 
 James2112 (1)    (34 / M-F / Texas)
19-Apr-12 2:37 am
@LaDawn1974: very poetic. Didn't know you wrote poetry

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
19-Apr-12 2:38 am
@James2112:

 

 

 
 
 James2112 (1)    (34 / M-F / Texas)
19-Apr-12 2:45 am
Would like to see more of that creativity. That was really good.

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
20-Apr-12 4:50 pm
I'm pulled thin,
About to break at the seams,
Heart broken and tired,
But still I stand,
And still I fight,
With righteous indignation,
I carry the torch,
Of self reproach,
In the darkness,
Of another lonely night.

 

 

 
 
 James2112 (1)    (34 / M-F / Texas)
20-Apr-12 5:40 pm
@LaDawn1974: another lovely poem

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes1211 
20-Apr-12 6:45 pm
Very nice!!

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
21-Apr-12 6:47 am
Is there a limit to kindness,
Is there any such thing as "too nice",
If the heart is true to its intentions,
Should we not give without fail.
All that we have the ability to give,
Should be given freely,
If our intent is to Love!

 

 

 
 
 James2112 (1)    (34 / M-F / Texas)
21-Apr-12 11:25 am
@LaDawn1974: *clapping* you're good

 

 

 
 
 LaDawn1974 
24-Apr-12 7:07 pm
I read this and cant remember where but it so fits WHO I am!!!!

Live ur life that the fear of death can never enter ur heart
Trouble no one about his religion
Respect others and their views
and Demand that they respect urs
Love ur life
Perfect ur life
Seek to make ur life long and of service to ur people
When ur time comes to die be not like those whos hearts are filled with fear of death
So that when their time comes to die
They weep and pray for a little more time
So that they may live their life again in a different way
Sing ur death song
And die like a hero coming home...

 

 

 
 
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