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Darkness Within (by IrishLove1988)

 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
1-Sep-12 7:41 pm
The tears in her eyes glitter for the world.
They twinkle like diamonds as they slide to the floor.
She's tried to stay strong, to keep it inside...
The dam has broken, she can't do it anymore.

She's the rock, the one everyone needs.
Always stable and ready to listen.
Where are they now, when she needs them most?
More tears slip, sparkle and glisten.

Alone, in a room so dark...
The silence is closing in.
She curls around herself...
Heal? She doesn't even know where to begin.

The pit of despair, the chasm of self doubt.
Always alone, always seeking.
Looking for the other half of her heart.
Deep within her, her soul is bleeding...

 

 

 
 
 lovablesweety 
1-Sep-12 7:46 pm
sweet

 

 

 
 
 cookie123 (5)   (57 / M-F / Scotland)
1-Sep-12 7:52 pm
Dont mean 2 b rude,it reads a lot like alace cooper only woman bleed.. hope ur hart conectes with the one...

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
1-Sep-12 7:53 pm
very beautifully written. :)

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
1-Sep-12 8:04 pm
@mrb: Thanks hun!

@lovablesweety: Much appreciated!

@cookie: I don't listen to Alice Cooper so trust me, it's just a coincidence. But thank you.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
1-Sep-12 8:05 pm
@IrishLove1988: this is so very good again my friend! :D

 

 

 
 
 IrishLove1988 (18)    (36 / F-M / New York)
1-Sep-12 8:07 pm
Thanks James :)

 

 

 
 
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