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Darkness and light (by james85)

 james85 
23-Aug-12 10:41 pm
Just a short poem as i havent posted anything new in a while:
One side is my darkness, my sadness.
The other is my light, my happiness.
Constantly changing,
day by day, hour by hour.
It's like a set of scales.
What side will win?

 

 

 
 
 hunter13 
23-Aug-12 10:44 pm
I vote light short but creative and smooth I like it

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (54 / F-M / California)
23-Aug-12 10:54 pm
Love it james. Its very good.

 

 

 
 
 ThatNerdyChick (32)    (30 / F-MF / Virginia)
24-Aug-12 1:36 am
Nice! c:

 

 

 
 
 james85 
24-Aug-12 8:41 am
thanks everyone :)

 

 

 
 
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