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Broken curse (by james85)

 james85 
9-Aug-12 11:42 pm
Everyone something extremley significant happened tonight, twice. this poem reflects my feelings at this moment:
I've waited so long for this moment in time.
I understand what was said to me.
Now i finally know happiness.
And the curse that has followed me for so long has been broken.
It may give me more questions than answers.
But i know now what it feels like.
I asked and i recieved.
The joy i feel now will never be replaced.

 

 

 
 
 tanrebel2011 
9-Aug-12 11:43 pm
Great poem

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
9-Aug-12 11:51 pm
:)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
9-Aug-12 11:55 pm
@tanrebel2011: thanks sir

 

 

 
 
 james85 
9-Aug-12 11:56 pm
@alynn: lol another one off the top of my head :)

 

 

 
 
 alynn 
10-Aug-12 1:25 am
@alynn: lol another one off the top of my head :)
Those 'in the moment' emotions tend to have that effect: writing good stuff off the top of your head. :) Aww, I'm so proud of you *pinches your cheeks* lol.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
10-Aug-12 2:22 am
@alynn: thank you so much :) it was a moment that seemed unreal until it happened again.

 

 

 
 
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