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Why i was sad (by james85)

 james85 
26-Jul-12 9:14 pm
Just a short poem about my feelings today:
Why i was sad.
I had a dream that i failed,
in the things i wanted from my life.
I had a dream that noone cared.
And i said goodbye to all.
But then someone unexpected helped me.
Brought me from my darkness, and listened.
That person now forever holds a place in my heart and soul.

 

 

 
 
 EbonyRoses119 (40)  (30 / F-MF / Georgia)
26-Jul-12 9:17 pm
Aww, I like it James, im glad youre better now c:

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
26-Jul-12 9:17 pm
Awe that's both sad and sweet :)
I like it! Again, I can see you getting better! I see the emotion in it (well I can read it), and it's a very kind of bittersweet feeling. <3

 

 

 
 
 Leahrose 
26-Jul-12 9:18 pm
Wow another great verse ,wish i cud create things of beauty like that ,thank u

 

 

 
 
 aswjw89 (5)    (35 / F-MF / Mississippi)
26-Jul-12 9:21 pm
I love it too many people on here have been hurt alot

 

 

 
 
 james85 
26-Jul-12 9:23 pm
Thank you sis bud, yeah you and another person helped me out.
@mrb89: thank you, this one was just off the top of my head believe it or not.

 

 

 
 
 james85 
26-Jul-12 9:25 pm
@Leahrose: thank you very much, good luck with your book :)

 

 

 
 
 mrb89 
26-Jul-12 9:26 pm
@james85: those are sometimes the best kinds! I have ones like that I consider them more personal (and have not shared those). the emotions and feelings in 'off-the-top-of-the-head' are real and honest, and raw :)

 

 

 
 
 james85 
26-Jul-12 9:26 pm
@aswjw89: thank you, yeah but ive made so many friends here that make me so happy

 

 

 
 
 james85 
26-Jul-12 9:29 pm
@mrb89: lol and there was me thinking only i did that, yeah my thoughts at the moment are all over the place, but i still come here because of the people ive met, like you :)

 

 

 
 
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