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The future (by james85)

 james85 
17-Jun-14 8:59 pm
What do you all think of this wee poem

The future is scary to me
So much so that I'm frozen in fear
I cry so much about it
Every time that it enters my mind
So much has been granted to me
People i love, people i call special
I promised them id try, im also doing it for me

 

 

 
 
 2Hot4U2Handle 
18-Jun-14 5:18 am
Is it a first draft? I like it, both past and future. I have writings, not sure if i want to put them on here. Do you have any more?

 

 

 
 
 james85 
18-Jun-14 5:57 am
@2Hot4U2Handle: yeah i don't think i will edit it any more though. Yes i have loads of poems on here. Take a wee nosy :) and you should definitely post some of your poems. People will like them I'm sure

 

 

 
 
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